Last week we had gone to camp at long bay Marine Education Recreation Center.
We had plenty of fun and we had much more activities then you think.
This is my Remember When Poem which now will be my life remembering.
That Was Camp.
Remember when we were doing archery and we gave it a shot?
Remember when I was looking at the view in the early morning and it was paradise?
That was camp.
Remember when we were doing mountain biking and we went to a haunted house?
Remember when we were doing stackem and the strange shaking legs feeling hoped on?
That was camp.
Remember when my spoon went in the stinky smelly rubbish bin when we were washing our own dishes?
Do you remember when I was surfing and the giant waves came like a tsunami?
That was camp.
Hey Shahid,
ReplyDeleteYour Camp collage is amazing! I enjoyed reading your poetry too. It reminds me when we were sleeping in our dorms. Now that we're at school we can still remember it as out memories. I like how you used some descriptive phrases just like how Mrs Kingston asked. Keep up the great work and your writing will be just as amazing as this one. If you want to comment on my work, here is the link: hpslylem.blogspot.co.nz
Tu Meke ( Too much ) and Tino Pai ( Very Good )
From Lyle
Thanks Lyle,
DeleteI would give you a comment later on. But thanks for the comment it makes me proud and really makes me switched on. Thanks and I still remember when we were in our Dorm That was amazing and it would be better if we were asleep earlier.
Shahid
G'day Shahid,
ReplyDeleteYour poem is really good because you have used the Year 6 language features. I really like Your Collage because you have chosen the pictures really carefully, The colours you have chosen are really good. I have a question, Have you done any other activities?
Arnav
Namaste Arnav,
DeleteI like how you have commented on your blog check out my comment on your blog. I have done lots of activities and I also did Surf Kayaking and Camp was a perfect experience for me. Do you think it was a cool experience for you? Thanks for your comment.
Shahid