I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
Wednesday, 10 December 2014
My End of Year Reflection
Salaam this is my End of Year reflection. Hope you enjoy and comment!!!
Wednesday, 26 November 2014
Athletics Day Recount
We had our Athletics on 24.11.14
White team was at the events. We tried to do our best but when It happened It didn’t I was discombobulated that all the other teams came a place except orange team and white team.
My team was at long jump this was our last event.
White team was at there last event and we tried to do our best I tried my best. But the other players from our team were watching us jumping at long jump. If you even have a go and give it your best shot you get a point for that.
Now the sprints.
I was nervous I was discombobulated if I was going to win or lose I had the sweat on my hands
I had to lose I raced and BOOM!!! I was going slow I didn't want to go fast I went and I lost I went to my seat and I couldn't believe that I lost.
Friday, 24 October 2014
Holidays
HOLIDAYS
In the holiday I practice playing cricket and I was bowling and my team mate was batting I throw and it bounced and hit the wickets I was enjoying it.
Also we went to rainbows-end and I like the bumper cars and bumper boats.
I enjoy the holidays so much and also I did go to lots of places.
Thursday, 23 October 2014
The Gigantic Dog
The Gigantic Dog!!!
Introduction
Parents are kindsisters are mean
brothers are good
The Build Up
This morning I saw my mum and dad and sister downstairs and I had breakfast. “Are we going to the beach,” Said Shahid. My parents were deciding about going to the beach Where big waves are and heaps of people.
but then we would need the money. My sister said, “no I don’t want to go.”
I woke up next morning at 7:30 and got ready had breakfast with my parents and told “dad it was only $10 for each person.” We were there at the beach on my feet I felt the shivering uncomfortable sand on my feet. then I went to surf…
The Dilemma
Then a huge gigantic brown furry dog caught me. WOOF I scram but that didn't help then I just cuddled down on the shore then the gigantic dog stopped and gave up.
The Resolution
My parents called the security and the police and then the police got there mega big gate and they tried and tried to catch it but then at last the dog went far far away from the shore.
The Ending
Next morning I was at my friends house playing cricket and we went to Eden Park to watch a cricket game.
Thursday, 25 September 2014
My Rhyming Poem
Hi This is my rhyming poem I tried my best but this is what I ended up with.
This was what I written today.
ONE DAY I SAW A GOOGLY MOOGLY MONSTER SITTING ON THE TRASH WHENEVER I SEE HIM HE'S ON THE STASH.
HE’S ALWAYS HAPPY BUT TODAY HE GOT BASHED.
BUT NOW HE’S DEAD.Friday, 19 September 2014
My Free Verse Poem
and I had written this.
I have got ideas from this picture
and put it in sentences.
Title:THE TSUNAMI
BOOM!!!!
The wave crashed as something looked like something breaking. Waves are high as big feet!
humongous like a Tsunami.
The shiny big blue sea
was at high tide!
The beach was covered
with water and sand.
Tuesday, 9 September 2014
My Diamante Poem
Hi this is my dimante poem. It is all about emotions.
This poem is a diamante poem that I have written.
The diamante poem is called
dimante because your writing
has to be shaped as a diamond
so that is why they call it dimante poem.
This poem is a diamante poem that I have written.
The diamante poem is called
dimante because your writing
has to be shaped as a diamond
so that is why they call it dimante poem.
Happy
Satisfied, careful
Helping, loving, joying
Blissful, buoyant, blessed, overjoyed
Upbeat, disturbing, crying
Homesick, sulky
Sad
Thursday, 14 August 2014
Thursday, 31 July 2014
My map all about reefs
This afternoon I learnt where well known reefs are then we had to copy the names of different reefs .
Thursday, 24 July 2014
My Mihi presentation Movenote
https://www.movenote.com/v/KtxDrXGQOXXZ3
This is my movenote on Nga Mihi and this is my second go. I hope you enjoy it.
Friday, 4 July 2014
My thing-link about New Zealand coast
This is my thing-link about New zealand coast and I hoped you enjoyed it.

Thursday, 26 June 2014
Nga manawa
Hi this is about mangroves we had Kennedy coming in to teach us how mangroves grow and what mangrove are around the world.
Monday, 16 June 2014
100 Word Challenge
- ...but that’s what happens in Brazil when…
- Brazil
- Goal
- England
- Soccer
- Football
- FIFA
- Singing
- Clapping
- Cheering
Goal! Said Ronaldo everybody was cheering and clapping but then the other team got a penalty so Ronaldo get the penalty kick and so he moves back ball and he runs and kicks it and it a GOAL! Manchester united is on fire and everybody cheers and claps and dance and sing. So Manchester united 2
England 0 so everybody settled down and England has the ball and England gets it out. Manchester united has the ball and Ronaldo has the ball and he Ronaldo’s on fire so the man of the match: Ronaldo
Thursday, 12 June 2014
Wednesday, 11 June 2014
The Popplet
Hi this is the popplet and we had to watch a video clip of the secrets used in advertising.
The 100 Word Challenge
Hi This is about the 100 word challenge yo have to write 100 words and there are different types of prompts.This weeks prompt was a picture of an ester egg and builders trying to make it again.

Once upon a time there was a group of people called Tom, Sam, James the setting is set in a city called Manty city and there are eggs hanging on the clouds. Wait Tom said Hey I hear a cracking sound “hey look out Sam!” shouted Tom the chocolate egg is going to fall!But the egg fall and James and Tom were worried then they tried to investigate and so people were coming to play soccer but James and Tom said “look out chocolate egg is going to fall!”So they went around and didn’t notice and everybody dies.
Once upon a time there was a group of people called Tom, Sam, James the setting is set in a city called Manty city and there are eggs hanging on the clouds. Wait Tom said Hey I hear a cracking sound “hey look out Sam!” shouted Tom the chocolate egg is going to fall!But the egg fall and James and Tom were worried then they tried to investigate and so people were coming to play soccer but James and Tom said “look out chocolate egg is going to fall!”So they went around and didn’t notice and everybody dies.
Thursday, 5 June 2014
My flipping eBook on Goal setting
This is my flipping ebook and I have done it on my goal setting and I used it on flipsnack.com
Wednesday, 4 June 2014
100 word challenge
The 100 word challenge is there are 4 or 5 words that you have to put in your story and you can use other words is well the prompt we were given was: gateway, cold, running, black, friend.
I was running to the mansion gateway and the colour was black and so my friend was waiting for me to play rugby but it was to cold. So I to the mansion and went up the stairs and I could not believe it and because it was all icy and freezing in my room so I and my friend got burning water and throw the bucket and it was so cold that I nearly slept. So I went down the ladder to the underground room where the people always are and so they came down the stairs so I went to the ladder.
I was running to the mansion gateway and the colour was black and so my friend was waiting for me to play rugby but it was to cold. So I to the mansion and went up the stairs and I could not believe it and because it was all icy and freezing in my room so I and my friend got burning water and throw the bucket and it was so cold that I nearly slept. So I went down the ladder to the underground room where the people always are and so they came down the stairs so I went to the ladder.
Thursday, 29 May 2014
Sculpture trail
Hi this is all about the sculpture trail and it was so cool how we made the carving shadows, we had the craft knife to cut the ice cream lids and we had to have a supervisor to make sure we don't cut our shelf.
Thursday, 8 May 2014
Wednesday, 16 April 2014
Doubling halving
Hi this is all about doubling and halving and this is what I did so far.Check out Pixiclip.com.
Friday, 11 April 2014
Goal Setting for Term 2
Last night we had parents interview all about goal setting term 2.
Friday, 28 March 2014
Shahid's PB4L poster
Hi this is a PB4L poster, it is all about being a positive learner, being respectful and being safe. At Hay Park School we call this following the Hay Park Way.
Thursday, 27 March 2014
All about me
This is my second one and I now know how to write a blog post and how to embed a presentation.
All about me google draw
We did All about me with Miss Paton and this is my first time blogging.
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