In Week 6 of Term 1 our class focused on how to write great explanations. We wrote about how to survive your first night in Minecraft (the game a lot of us are obsessed with!). Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.
This is my Writing:
Hey Shahid,
ReplyDeleteOne star for you is that you wrote a really clear explanation and One wish is to use some ambitious Vocabulary,
Do you need help for finding the right place to add ambitious Vocab.
Arnav