Back To The Future Learning

In McCahon Class we have been learning about Auckland now and in the olden days.
We have done some lessons of compering Auckland now and in the days.
I hope you enjoy our presentation. If you came across to the end
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The Viewer Poem

 This is my poem is about The Viewer book by (Shaun Tan)

This poem is made by Arnav and Shahid’s Poem.

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City Dump

Mysterious light upon the boy.

Broken, cracked, horrifying property. 

Dark scary things like a pitch black spider. boy maybe homeless.

Mouldy television.

The Viewer Having Restless Sleeps...

This week we are into The Viewer book by (Shaun Tan). There was a phrase that said "he was having a restless sleep" so we had to act it out. The book is about a boy named Tristan and he look at the olden day picture machine were it shows all sorts of photos and he saw them but he could not sleep. I have worked with my friend Arnav to act out and edit the photo. Here is the soundscape link:

Restless Sleep...

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Sir Peter Blake Facts File

This is my fact file about Sir Peter Blake. 

Hope you enjoy reading it and finding out lots more

THE AMAZE OF ASHES

This term we are going to be writing all sorts of different texts.
Here is my four sentence recount about The Best Series Ashes

Quad Blogging Comment To Paerata School

Greetings,
This is my recent comment to Paerata School.
In Hay Park School we have recently been doing something called quad blogging. Which is we comment on schools depending what schools there are and what week it is we take turns for a week to comment or you reply to comments.

HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED WHY MARS IS SO DANGEROUS...

TITTLE: HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED WHY MARS IS SO DANGEROUS...

Introduction:

  Have you ever wondered why people don’t live on Mars.

Well today i’m going to tell you lots about Mars the planet.

These paragraphs are going to tell you  surface features, could humans live on Mars,

Humans Exploration of Mars.

Surface Features:

 Mars looks hot in the inside but actually it is cold in Mars. Suddenly Mars has no carbon dioxide also Mars is really dry it’s like a desert with volcanos. Mars has the biggest volcano in our solar system known. Mars has a really thin atmosphere that is why it causes to be cold.

Could Humans live on Mars?:

 Humans can’t live on Mars , Mars is an uninhabitable planet because it is very cold and not much except volcanos. Also there is only a little bit of oxygen and not one person has been on Mars. If people go to Mars then they could get skin cancer because there is not much in Mars except volcanos. Mars has dust-storms that could last for a month or two.  

Humans Exploration Of Mars:

  Mars is thousands of kilometers away and space crafts wouldn't have enough  fuel. Although Mars has a really thin atmosphere that is why it’s very cold.

Earth to Mars takes about 1.6 years and roughy 260 days that would be very long.  Most importantly, since January 2004, the robotic rovers opportunity and spirits have been trekking around Mars to get more identification of Mars. Mars has slots of rover still over there.

Conclusion:
 I hope you now know more identification about Mars, our closest neighbor. Also if you want some 

more key ideas then visit this website: http://www.planetsforkids.org/planet-mars.html. I hope this information report encouraged you to write your own.    

How to Survive your first night in Minecraft

Hello today I'm going to share my learning with the internet I play minecraft in my own time and I am know going to show you how to survive your first night in minecraft.

In Week 6 of Term 1 our class focused on how to write great explanations. We wrote about how to survive your first night in Minecraft (the game a lot of us are obsessed with!). Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.

This is my Writing:

Welcome to 2015!!!

              Welcome to 2015 week 2 of term 1.

today i'm going to talk about my word could 

This year i'm in McCahon class, I enjoy playing with my friends, this word cloud is about

what is important to me and who i am, Also I used abcya word cloud to make this.

Make sure you check my blog because more posts are coming!!!

100 word challenge

The 100 word challenge is there are 4 or 5 words that you have to put in your story and you can use other words is well the prompt we were given was: gateway, cold, running, black, friend.


I was running to the mansion gateway and the colour was black and so my friend was waiting for me to play rugby but it was to cold. So I to the mansion and went up the stairs and I could not believe it and because it was all icy and freezing in my room so I and my friend got burning water and throw the bucket and it was so cold that I nearly slept. So I went down the ladder to the underground room where the people always are and so they came down the stairs so I went to the ladder.