Once upon a time there was a group of people called Tom, Sam, James the setting is set in a city called Manty city and there are eggs hanging on the clouds. Wait Tom said Hey I hear a cracking sound “hey look out Sam!” shouted Tom the chocolate egg is going to fall!But the egg fall and James and Tom were worried then they tried to investigate and so people were coming to play soccer but James and Tom said “look out chocolate egg is going to fall!”So they went around and didn’t notice and everybody dies.
Shahid, you have some great ideas. I can see you are trying to punctuate speech correctly so keep working on that. I personally find the all capital letter font a little hard to read but others mat disagree. Remember to re-read your writing to check for punctuation and meaning (or get a friend to help you).
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